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To The Nice Guy:

So, you think it’s rough.
You think life hates you so bad,
Cause That Girl you’re so into
Is one you just can’t seem to grab.

You make the move and she turns you down.
You don’t know why, but
She just wants to be with The Jerk.
No one wants The Nice Guy.

Before she tossed your heart to the curb,
Who warned you of her little game?
After she lead you on,
Who was it to ease your pain?

Who held you all those nights,
When your tears came crashing down?
Who picked you up and brushed you off,
After she pushed you around?

That Girl doesn’t speak of what she’s done and
You think she doesn’t know
Of all the pain she’s given to you.
The truth is she’s not that slow.

There is another girl, and
She’s actually worth your time, your effort, and tears.
She is the Nice Girl, you know,
The one you’ve been “looking for” all these years.

It’s funny, how things work out.
That Girl, the one you want, hurts you and lies,
But you ignore the one who’s been there for you,
The Nice Girl, calming your heartbreaking cries.

If there is anyone around who knows grief,
The Nice Girl takes the greatest fall.
She’s kept your promises; she’s been your best friend
But still you can’t see her at all.

She is all you’ve ever wanted, but goes
Unnoticed still, as you chase That Girl’s tail.
Neither one will say a word, but
Both of them know you are destined to fail.

When the other looks away,
The Nice Girl looks you square in the eye.
Though she smiles and laughs,
Inside she is stifling her own cry.

She would give anything just to hold your hand
She would give anything to let her emotions free.
But instead she looks at you in wonder, thinking:
“Why do you want her, and not me?”
©2007-2009 ~velvet-reverie
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I started this a while ago, found it again, and finished! It makes me feel...better...about things.



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your poems really good. i was... inspired so I wrote something.

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You cant spell slaughter without laughter
haha thanks

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Life is incomplete without coffee.
I haven't read one of your poems in such a long time. I love them though, I always have. Another tally for your minds achievements.

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SirSnailsWigbee
I've been left in the dust, but I'm picking up speed.
:D Thank you!!

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Life is incomplete without coffee.
That poem...yunno what? There are no words to explain it. It's amazing because yunno this situation ALWAYS seems to happen and you just can't understand why men are sooo blind...-sighs-


Great job! love it. =)

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i know how it feels
when love goes away.
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tread softly.
thanks for reading and faving!

I'm glad you love it.

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